|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
BREAK
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 10:39:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
I just want to break
I just want to fall
I just want to choke
Let go of it all
I just want to slip
Cry myself to sleep
I just want to collapse
Get in too deep
I just want to cut
Feel crash and burn
I just want to fade
Lose my concern
I want to be broken
To fall on my knees
I just want to feel pain
So hurry up please
Copyright ©
blue_angel
... [
2005-07-14 22:39:41]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: BREAK
(User Rating: 1 )
by Wannabe on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 10:46:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Yup, that's anguish if I ever heard it. It's a nice write. |
|
|
Re: BREAK
(User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 10:47:28 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i think theres alot of meaning behind the words and it was a good write, but i suggest that maube you try to bring out more description into the poem to really highlight the need your feeling, just a thought.otherwise i thought it was good =) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
