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Broken
Contributed by
xXDreyXx
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Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:29:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Walking down the street
Hearing every step
Knowing I was there
But she ignored me
I knew she heard me
Every tear dropping
But on I walked
Never to breathe again
Saw my soul fade away
Slowly but very surely
Fate brought us together
Now apart for good
I did scream my fears
And showed her the scars
Kissed her one last time
Then went to face death
She followed me
I pushed her away
Tears fell
And so did I
Hitting the blood
Knowing I was gone
Saw from above
That she did really love me
But to late to go back
Too late for takebacks
Told her I loved her
Told her I cared
But no longer alive
Makes my entire life
Good-bye forever angel
I'll forever miss you
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xXDreyXx
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2005-07-15 01:29:00]
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Re: Broken
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:23:10 AM AEST
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This is so sad. A great love lost. It's a tragedy when we love wholeheartedly only never to get it back in return. Good luck to you on future endeavors. This poem was wrought in emotion!
I loved it!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Broken
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by halli on
Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 03:00:36 PM AEST
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i loved it. it has all the making of a great work
sad, and full of tragedy and lost love! keep it up please.
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