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Calling
Contributed by
xXDreyXx
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Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:33:19 AM in AEST
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Hearing a voice so soft
Passing thro the mid nite breeze
Knowing who it was
Knowing where
Wondering whether to follow
Should I care
That the crying sobs
Will always be near
A moment passed
A thot crossed my mind
So I began to walk
Watching every step
Nearing the door
Sobs continue
Hearing every tear drop
Knowing the pain
Ran to her
Waited for an answer
The opening showed more
Blood hit the floor
In my arms so lifeless
She was
Whats done is done
Together never more
As I follow her to the end
And together we lie
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Re: Calling
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 06:55:06 PM AEST
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Very sad,but nicely written
God Bless! |
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Re: Calling
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by BEE on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 12:39:16 AM AEST
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loven the small sentences and how u put it together...
ps look at my poems and comment |
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