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Journal
Contributed by
aplsdka
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Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 01:57:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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I'm sitting here, pencil in hand,
trying to make my mom understand,
I have nothing to say
In my jornal today.
It may take all night,
Or until it gets light,
To find something to write,
Even though i'm real bright
Copyright ©
aplsdka
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2005-07-15 01:57:49]
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Re: Journal
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by SinginSilence on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:10:54 AM AEST
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| Hmm i say that's pretty good for 3rd grade actually, but if your kidding and that wasnt really 3rd grade i would be very tempted to laugh in your face. yeah great 3rd grade poetry otherwise, and thanx for the smile either way. |
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Re: Journal
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:19:07 AM AEST
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I thought it was pretty good either way.
good job. |
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Re: Journal
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by sandypoet on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 05:12:05 AM AEST
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| The gift began and continues on....... great write. |
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Re: Journal
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:56:08 PM AEST
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lol I'm quite confident my first poem ever was not this good!! Thanks for sharing : )
Scorp. |
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Re: Journal
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by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 01:28:37 AM AEST
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| wow this is awesome ashley |
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