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Violet King
Contributed by
Blu
on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:06:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Soft of light
he dances forward
knowing where secrets are buried
he smiles all the same
Speaking little
he says too much
his wanderings have wounded
though draped in uncertainty
He ravishes the street
his fire has consumed what the eye touches
and burned what the pen can still feel
though they still amble past
It is his song that is familiar-
taking the poet into its own
and crushing and forming anew
even when the chorus is too much
While the memories are tied
to the very essence that moves him forward
though he says he is disturbed
and does not want to know why
He moves all too languidly
fluidly captivating his audience
and stealing at the same time-
he presses forward relentlessly
My violet king, you have darkened my soul
Copyright ©
Blu
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2005-07-15 12:06:22]
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Re: Violet King
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:53:47 PM AEST
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| well done |
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Re: Violet King
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by Dri on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 02:15:37 PM AEST
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god... i have a king of my own, and this hits so close to home...
emotional sympathies aside, this write is stunning. keep it coming! |
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Re: Violet King
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 05:37:49 PM AEST
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Beautifully emoted.
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Re: Violet King
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by vibes2go on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 05:41:52 PM AEST
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| nicely done, although the word is buried with one r . |
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