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SHUTTERS TO THE SOUL
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
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Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 04:13:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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SHUTTERS TO THE SOUL
Did you know your eyes tell all?
No one can hide their inner soul,
Spiritual windows reveal our downfall.
Indicating tool for Drs--alive or in Sheol?
Personalities our eyes have like we.
Passionate, yearning, longing, grieving beauty
Hopefulness, Hopelessness, Hospitable.
Sad, regretful, sorry, heart's chuckle.....
Scared, anxious, frightened, worried
Depressed, impressed, repressed, hurried
Forlorn, compassionate, tenderness, sympathy, pity
Angry, hatefulness, vengefulness, enmity, animosity.
Painted for emphasis, an inviting window
Alluring, endearing, hypnotic stare, shadow.
Depth, shallow, understanding, compassionate
Venerable, judging, a sizing up, or edit.
Painful, forgetfulness, worry, despair, agony
Frustration, failure, not fulfilled, can't agree.
Unsuccessful, bring to naught, broken dreams.
Crushed heart, ripped seams, low esteems.
Love lost, loneliness, no natural affection, inhuman
Estrangement from the world, exile, aloofness, beaten.
Giving up, too hard, not worthy, undeserving severe
Troubled, unclear, false veneer, not sincere.
Yes, young or old, our eyes reveal what is in our hearts.
Not knowing, but questioning, with full faith abound.
Wondering, always curious, little thinking sweethearts.
Look into another's eyes, where all their feelings can be found,
Created by
Lovingcritters
consue
June 9, 2005
"The eyes have one language everywhere"
~ George Herbert~
(English metaphysical Poet and Clergyman, 1593-1633)
"Smiling eyes"
P.S. The precious little
girl above is the daughter
of Christine Lowman.
Right here on YPDC!
Copyright ©
Lovingcritters
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Re: SHUTTERS TO THE SOUL
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by NoSaint on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 04:40:52 PM AEST
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lovely write my friend
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 04:55:41 PM AEST
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Ah, LeAnn is so beautiful. This poem states how I have always felt. I can see your soul in your eyes. That is the first thing I notice about someone. It tells all. No makeup, no special look can cover the openess of the persons soul. Marvelous Connie. As usual. Claire de Lune is one of my favorites of all times.
Much love,
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by shelby on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 07:43:22 PM AEST
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beautiful write Conni and so very true our eyes are the window to our soul and little MS LeAnn your adorable!! DIdnt Christina and Rob do great??
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by Ripper_Something_Unusual on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 09:09:26 PM AEST
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| Amazing write, I love the language and the emotion. Great structure and very heartfelt.... love the George Herbert quote at the end... fantastic. |
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 12:19:37 AM AEST
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Yes, indeed...the eyes are the windows to our soul...Nice job ConSue! I enjoyed this write, and love the pictures too! Especially that little cutie girl at the end!
Scorp. |
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by bernard on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 03:05:44 AM AEST
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| ConSue, How very true! The eyes are the doorway to the soul. I sometimes see a childs eyes and the tears well up within me. I see the eyes of an eighty year old and I want to smile. This is and has always been my way of judging my friends. If they can stand my piercing gaze for a moment I know whether I may call them friend. Well put Consue and top marks as always hugs from Martha and Bernard. |
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 08:58:52 AM AEST
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| AAAWWW You put my precious baby Leann on this poem,how true her eyes can really say alot! Beautiful blue eyes is what mommy calls her! This was so well done I loved it from beginning to end,you always can tell what a person is thinking by their eyes. Love ya Connie Sue .Christina |
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Re: SHUTTERS TO THE SOUL
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 09:25:54 AM AEST
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Glorious ConSue. Oh yes, we know that the eyes are the very windows to the soul.
I appreciate very much your quoting George Herbert, my favorite poet.
Content and pictures simply splendid.
But, I have to state, you pre-empted me.
How would you know.? "Eye-Contact"? -was un preparatin.?
Amazing how poets intuitively feel what is to be brought forward. The pictures are also fabulous, and of course the photo of the little girl of your friend.
Wonderful job!
Warm love
Elizabeth |
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 11:16:23 AM AEST
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Wow, she's a beauty and very happy u can plainly see. Christina's little angel.
Awesome write mom and thanks for catching me up on Christian's long awaited bundle of joy.
A masterpeice of truth.
huggs, sluv,
yobrat,
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Re: SHUTTERS TO THE SOUL
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by remote on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 12:41:52 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was quite an exhibition and a great walkthrough. |
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