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The Pain She Feels
Contributed by
KSUHO11
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Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 08:22:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The Pain She Feels
She was only seventeen
Forced to make it on her own
Her dad abandoned her
Her mom doesnt want her
She tries to hide the pain
The pain she feels inside
She was just an innocent girl
Forced to take it on herself
But she goes away
To tame the fear
Fear to let someone in
To let someone take her pain away
But Ill be there
Ill be there to steal your pain
She was left all alone
All alone to taste death
When she cries it would take my wind
Her eyes would cut into my soul
She cant to this much longer
The pain she feels inside
Is going to be too much
But I just want to know
Why her, what did she ever do?
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Re: The Pain She Feels
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by inoc on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 11:57:23 PM AEST
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The pain she feels is in your poem stated so vividly
I hope she can find peace somehow...though obviously she is feeling alone and feels the pain in her soul
I pray God can ease this situation and find love to smooth things over
....take care now, you seem a caring friend!
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