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Keep me dancing
Contributed by
patch81
on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Oh lately i been feeling blue,
On my knees is what im seeking,
You
I take a taste of whats mellow,
Come my way to something better
What i want is what I've not got
But what i need is all around me,
I reach and search, and never stop,
And will i say...
If you could keep me dancing just for a little while
'Till i get to the end of my own tunnel
If you could keep me dancing just for a little while
I'll Get back to you
Sometimes im dancing
Scoot my way and keep me swingin
I'd like to show you whats inside
But I shouldnt care if you do or don't like it
Hurt rules all about
Well, sometimes i walk there
Yes, God knows, Sometimes I take a bus there
Shouldnt care, I shouldnt care,
Mellow as i am feeling
You know, the day is gone im on my back
Staring at the ceiling
I take a drink and sit back to relax
Smoke my mind makes me feel
Better for a small time
What i want is what i've not got
And what i need is all around me
I reach and search and never stop
And I'll say...
If you could keep me dancing just for a little while
'Till i get to the end of my own tunnel, Darling
If you could keep me dancing just for a little while
I'll Get back to you
Sometimes im dancing
Scoot my way and keep me swingin
I'd like to show you whats inside
But I shouldnt care if you do or don't like it
Hurt rules all about
Well, sometimes i walk there
Yes, God knows, Sometimes I take a bus there
Shouldnt care, I shouldnt care,
Mellow as i am feeling
latley Ive been feeling blue
And a remedy's what im looking for
I take a taste of whats mellow
Come away...
If you could keep me dancing just for a little while
'Till i get to the end of my own tunnel, Darling
If you could keep me dancing just for a little while
I'll Get back to you
Sometimes im dancing
Scoot my way and keep me swingin
I'd like to show you whats inside
But I shouldnt care if you do or don't like it
Hurt rules all about
Well, sometimes i walk there
Yes, God knows, Sometimes I take a bus there
Shouldnt care, I shouldnt care,
Mellow as i am feeling
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Re: Keep me dancing
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by AzurePaladin on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:25:05 AM AEST
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| Well done!!! A nice write indeed!! :D |
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Re: Keep me dancing
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by FireStorm12 on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:21:13 AM AEST
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| Very nice...very well written. I am inspired by it. I recently lost my wife...she left me...and I still hope to get her back. So good luck. I hope you get what your heart truly wants! |
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Re: Keep me dancing
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 07:31:37 AM AEST
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I like this very much patch...it would make lovely lyric for a song...I can almost here the music.
Chrissie :) |
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Re: Keep me dancing
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 06:19:39 PM AEST
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| you piece of *****...do u always just copy songs, change a few words then claim it as your own poetry? |
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