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Hotcake Lovin’
Contributed by
Evshrug
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Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:46:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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My love for you is like a pancake
Your eyes are like underripe blueberries, sharp and zesty
Your skin like a generous slather of butter
Your lips, the warm tines of my swift fork
Our souls stuck by syrup between the layers
When Im with you, my heart flips perfectly on the skillet
I want to savor you
Be a part of my complete breakfast
Copyright ©
Evshrug
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2005-07-15 22:46:21]
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Re: Hotcake Lovin’
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:51:19 PM AEST
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that;s funny
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Re: Hotcake Lovin’
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by thepizzaguy on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:54:32 PM AEST
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| The analegy here is amazing. Although i don't understand why the blueberries are unripe. Still, I don't think anyone would have thought of the whole complete breakfast vein to take. I have a feeling you were inspired by someones intake of syrup this afternoon. Haha. Still, very well thought out, this one makes people taste the love you feel. |
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Re: Hotcake Lovin’
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 06:22:14 AM AEST
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Well I hope u got highest score caus this is awesome. U r very creative.
Hugs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Hotcake Lovin’
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 06:22:14 AM AEST
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Well I hope u got highest score caus this is awesome. U r very creative.
Hugs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Hotcake Lovin’
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 01:43:42 AM AEST
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| Haha, very cute and creative. I loved the imagery. It made me hungry. :-) |
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