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Wasted life
Contributed by
Silent_it_iz
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Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 01:55:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Looking at this wasted life,
Looking at my Pain,
Never Thinking twice doing all of my mistakes,
Taking No advice,Locking up my shame,
knowing it's going to come back to me one day,
Always running but no way to hide,no matter how much i try,
Falling to the floor,losing everything around,suffocating to survive
Lyin to myself jus to be alive, Freaking Out
Everything in my mind,destroys itself given the time,
Now you know me from the trail of no sense
Fading away on this screaming night,Trapped in my own maze and never getting out,
Emptyness is all i feel,never knowing whats going to come,
suffocation it'll bring so much,
I need some peace of mind so i can sleep ,the voices wont quit there in so deep cause knowing i am weak
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Re: Wasted life
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by trini on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 02:41:19 AM AEST
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Not bad for unfinished work
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Re: Wasted life
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 07:16:00 AM AEST
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Powerful stuff.
I like it alot and can very much relate to your feelings of desperation and paranoia.
I'm sure when it is finished it will be a brilliant piece of work.
Keep working on it dear poet! |
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