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The esacpe button
Contributed by
trini
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Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 02:31:25 AM in AEST
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hbadday
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I hit the escape button
Pick at a little scar on my face
Rubbing the open wound
I ponder
Why doesnt everything have an escape button?
Bad relationship?
Ryan left you waiting again?
No call, but you know its a new girl.
Abort, abort!
Escape button erases all memories,
Closed and deleted from the hard drive.
The wound continues to bleed
Or, terrible family?
Aunt Brenda has one too many
And dumps her wine all over the wall
And your new white dress,
Abort, abort
Escape button erases it
My thanksgiving started with a quick hello and good bye
The blood moving faster then the tears
All the nights you spent crying?
Tears rolled down your black and blue face
They were fighting again
Abort, abort!
But you cant
Its one of those annoying thoughts that you cant escape
If only we could get rid of it.
So I found my own escape button.
Copyright ©
trini
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2005-07-16 02:31:25]
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Re: The esacpe button
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by libra on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 02:43:48 AM AEST
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I llike this poem, because i wish i technically had an escape button, the only thing we have close to an ecsape button is drugs.LOL!!
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Re: The esacpe button
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by RoxyGirl on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 02:52:38 AM AEST
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I like this poem but you should really tell me were that esacpe button is because I looked on my body but no button!!!! LOL
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Re: The esacpe button
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by anonymussme on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 04:43:18 AM AEST
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i love this poem. the only real escape a ever found was cutting and i stopped doing that. soon afterwards i realized i wasnt escaping anyways
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Re: The esacpe button
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:47:37 AM AEST
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Very unique write.
a masterpeice.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The esacpe button
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 07:13:48 AM AEST
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Oh I very well written.
I loved the whole concept of having an "escape button" when in need of deliverance or escape. Or if we need to erase all traumatic memories.
If only there was such a button....only in a perfect world.
Well done though, I enjoyed reading this very much. |
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