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MY Nerves are SHOT!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My nerves are shot,I can't take much more,
This pain I can not hide,
for my problems I can't ignore,
I've been taking them in stride,
I've asked God,whom I trusted for years,
He does'nt help me,
I need him to help wipe away those tears,
why can't he hear my plea?
I need someone to hold me tight,
To tell me it's ok,
So wheres this hug,I've been waiting for,
To brighten my day?
I really feel I'm loosing control,
Nothing to hold on too,
I feel I'm falling in a hole,
God please get me through,
No one can tell me what I want to hear,
when they have problems too,
Its getting to the point I can't bare,
Please anyone tell me what to do,
I'm falling apart, and going insane,
please hear my cries,
My heart achs from all thats in my brain,
I don't want to hear the lies,
I'm here on my hands & knees,
begging to you,
I'm hopeing my family never sees,
This I'm going through,
I cry, I pray,please tell me this,
Where is the answers I needed?
Maybe there was something to miss,
I know I have beg & pleaded,
I've waited for tomorrow,
& I still do wait,
when the answers come,
It might be too late!
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LOWMAN613
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2003-01-10 11:00:00]
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Re: MY Nerves are SHOT!
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:07:15 AM AEST
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| Oh, Christina, there's a beautiful rainbow outside your window, shining like never before, everyday is new, yesterday is gone, live for today, bless you, I think I see that smile |
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Re: MY Nerves are SHOT!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:25:36 AM AEST
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| This is Heavenangel,I cant log in,but this really made me so heartfelt for you,I wish I could give you the hug you need,my friend! |
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Re: MY Nerves are SHOT!
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:25:13 PM AEST
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| this is so good...but also very sad...well done...beautifully written... |
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Re: MY Nerves are SHOT!
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 06:25:02 PM AEST
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very strong message good write i've been there a few times.
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Re: MY Nerves are SHOT!
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 06:25:03 PM AEST
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very strong message good write i've been there a few times.
Shari |
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Re: MY Nerves are SHOT!
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by spooky on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 07:29:17 PM AEST
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| i wish there was something that I could do,,I wish there was a way to help those who cryed out ,,I wish there was a way,to make all thing possible,,But i cant,,but theres only one person who can,,but you must be patient ,,he's helping them also,,,spooky |
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Re: MY Nerves are SHOT!
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by spooky on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 07:29:18 PM AEST
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| i wish there was something that I could do,,I wish there was a way to help those who cryed out ,,I wish there was a way,to make all thing possible,,But i cant,,but theres only one person who can,,but you must be patient ,,he's helping them also,,,spooky |
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Re: MY Nerves are SHOT!
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 10:59:06 PM AEST
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I can relate to a lot you wrote about in your poem
I've asked God,whom I trusted for years,
He does'nt help me,
Those two lines hit me the hardest and its so true for me as well. God seems to like to ignore me and you have discovered that as well. I liked this poem hopefully you can find healing in the words you write. Keep on hanging in there and living for the days when you can see the sun and there are no clouds
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Re: MY Nerves are SHOT!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 12:08:21 AM AEST
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| Remember to take just one day at a time.. Oh I know that is easy to say,,,but I do know that it isn't easy to do... Think of the good and not the bad,,,the world and God will embrace you only if you let them..... |
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