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Its done
Contributed by
Crazy4Christ
on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 11:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I don't know why I believed you
I don't know why I care
I don't know why It matters
this isn't goin anywhere
I can't understand this hurt
I can't comprehend the pain
All the lies you told....
You pushed upon me all the blame
You've made me feel useless
You've made me feel dumb
You've made me hurt and suffer
So now i just want you to know.....
Its done
Copyright ©
Crazy4Christ
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2003-01-10 11:20:00]
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Re: Its done
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by LJ on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 12:28:46 PM AEST
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This is a strong write.
Good Job! |
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Re: Its done
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 05:12:05 PM AEST
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| this is very powerful...i love this poem... |
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Re: Its done
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 10:40:06 AM AEST
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| full of emotion strong write very good |
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