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Though the sun shines
Contributed by
wilma
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Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 11:19:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I cannot wake without you.
Though the sun shines I fear my biggest hope.
I cannto explain my catastrophe of a mind that posses me when I`m near you.
Though the sun shines I will never be hopeful,
Without you my mind screams.
My headache is your thought , worming your way through the depths of my soul.
Though the sun shines, you will never consider me as anything.
Copyright ©
wilma
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2005-07-16 11:19:28]
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Re: Though the sun shines
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 11:28:27 AM AEST
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Haha...
who's the lucky girl...
Great poem( and advertising skills, lol), we always something we can't get...damned twisted world, eh...
cheers
-glass
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Re: Though the sun shines
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by justme03 on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:24:53 PM AEST
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OMG!!! U R SOO AWESOME!! this is yet ANOTHER awesome poem! LOVED IT absolutly LOVED IT!
i love the way you conveyed your feelings and wrote this and i really liek the line
"My headache is your thought, worming your way through the depths of my soul."
that was awesome and it had great imagery to it.
keep up the good work as you are VERY talented.
wish you well with your writings and hope all is well. rOcK oN!!!
~Kortnie~ |
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