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Dying rose
Contributed by
crazygirl
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Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 01:15:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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A rose, scarlet like the blood
Seepng from my wrist
The thorns taking place of the razor once held
One silken petal absorbing my feelings,
One dying rose being torn to peices
Once strong like the stem of the flower,
I now wilt like the dying rose....
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crazygirl
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2005-07-16 13:15:05]
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Re: Dying rose
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by Sexi_Lexi on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 03:59:11 PM AEST
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| wow! Your poem is so amzing and really readl exactly how it happens well done and i am glad u let it out by poems! |
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Re: Dying rose
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:05:53 PM AEST
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that was amazing! you have a real talent. keep it up
megs. |
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Re: Dying rose
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 06:01:53 PM AEST
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Pretty good expression in so few words...I like the analogy. One little spelling error..."Peice" should be "Piece." Nice job. Keep it up!
Scorp. |
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Re: Dying rose
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by Jen54 on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 09:48:35 PM AEST
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I like it a lot. I could see it in my head.
great job
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Re: Dying rose
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 10:57:15 PM AEST
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good write, short but deep. very deep. it was well written and created a visual to the readers. very well done, and i wish that you would not have to put up with such pain! i wish you the best of luck!
~sprints
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Re: Dying rose
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:50:31 PM AEST
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It's a nice poem, but too dark, a little too dark for me heh. I hope you just wrote and didn't act on your feelings.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Dying rose
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:21:02 PM AEST
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| Dark, but I like dark sometimes. Very nice write. :) |
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