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I cut 2 be free
Contributed by
Kazzy1231
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Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 05:58:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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I get the knife.
I always feel like taking my life.
I sit in the hut.
I start 2 cut.
People ask how the cuts got there.
I just say I fell down the stair.
I'm not sure if people believe me.
But I just want 2 be free.
Free from myself.
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Kazzy1231
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2005-07-16 17:58:22]
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Re: I cut 2 be free
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by LolaWhite on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 07:37:58 PM AEST
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I had a dear friend who cut herself too. It's a painful thing to watch your friend go through something like this. I hope that you have sought after some help. You aren't alone in this and there are people out there to help. If you need someone to talk to or you need some guidance feel free to message me. Good write. Sounds like a cry for help though.
Sincerely,
Miss Lola White |
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Re: I cut 2 be free
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by storm on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:19:01 AM AEST
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| there comes a time when we can feel lost and decide to give in or live out this life that was given to us. you can write,there you have something alot of people don''t. i hope you are getting what i am saying to you. |
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Re: I cut 2 be free
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 01:30:14 PM AEST
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it a very good poem. i can relate to it and i hope one day you manage to break through from the never ending cycle. you can always talk to me if you need too
megs.
xXx |
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Re: I cut 2 be free
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by Beni on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:47:03 PM AEST
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This is a great poem well done! I am also in your position and it is hard to tell people the truth and i find the best way to let it out is through poetry. you have expressed that!
well done once again xxx |
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Re: I cut 2 be free
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by Sad-one on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 12:46:09 PM AEST
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| i can totally relate. this was a great poem,short, but great.i FEEL LIKE CUTTING RIGHT ABOUT NOW! your an excellent writer and i`d` love to talk to you sometime.Pm me whenever. |
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Re: I cut 2 be free
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 09:10:28 PM AEST
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| i think only someone who does, or has cut can truly understand this poem. sometimes the only thing you can do about cutting is to write. i totally understand. you should read my poems, i think you might understand them. well message me sometime, or anytime. great poem. |
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