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Drawing a Blank
Contributed by
wakegurl77
on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:30:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Blank minds seem
to produce nothing
but empty words
and empty promices
blank screens seem
to ignite my pen
and twist my mind
blank cds seem
to kill the artist
and im guilty of murder
blank paper
seems to hold
my past
my present
and my future thoughts
and lastly
blank hearts seem
to hold no love
for anyone
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2005-07-17 00:30:08]
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Re: Drawing a Blank
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by girlxwithxpen on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 01:04:31 AM AEST
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| I think you had a good concept but the poem isn't really logical. If something is blank it can't seem to do anything. The only stanza I enjoyed was the 2nd because I know when you see a blank screen it inspires you to write. |
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Re: Drawing a Blank
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by MSU_freak on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 09:08:33 PM AEST
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| I like the last stanza, all together not too bad, keep working on it though! |
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Re: Drawing a Blank
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by europeanprincess on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 11:17:24 PM AEST
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| this was a bit different and i think it needed a little more. i understood where you were going becasue sometimes i stare in to blankness and never know what to really write and yet it does come out nad you start to write what ever comes to mind. hope that make some sense. thank you for sharing and please keep writing. |
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