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Tear
Contributed by
xXDreyXx
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:34:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Cant hear her
Wont listen
She took my heart
Broke it to pieces
Dropped to my knees
Screamed at you
Didnt matter anymore
And Ill leave you be
Ill go to the edge
Look down and wish
Grasped my arm
Begged me not to
Screamed again
Jumped off
Whispered before death
I love you
Motionless
One thing left of me
A tear
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xXDreyXx
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2005-07-17 00:34:56]
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Re: Tear
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by Kazzy1231 on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 11:40:49 AM AEST
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Re: Tear
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 10:54:44 AM AEST
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this is...almost sad, but yet truly wonderful. i love this!!! you almost have a suspense in this poem...shame it's in the least read section
- Bethani - |
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Re: Tear
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by pureheart07 on
Friday, 24th March 2006 @ 09:44:21 PM AEST
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| I agree very well written |
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