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Cold
Contributed by
xXDreyXx
on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:39:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm walking away
Never thot I'd see the day
The day that she said good-bye
My heart will never again fly
Far into the crimson sky we'd go
Sharing our fears, our love, our hope
But now here I lie
Still wondering why
I still walk among this earth
Knowing my mom should of never gave birth
For I was a mistake
And now i'mma fake
For once I had warmth
Also a beating heart
But now i am cold
No longer w/ a soul
Now flown away like my angel from my star
Never draw another breath, went way to far
Good-bye
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xXDreyXx
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2005-07-17 00:39:26]
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Re: Cold
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 01:29:36 AM AEST
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This is ok..
A loving tribute to your Mother..
(should've spell checked it though)
and done away with the slash in place of 'with'..
It'd be all the more powerful...graceful...poignant.
Thoughts and Prayers to You My Friend..
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