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Fire
Contributed by
wakegurl77
on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 12:56:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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twas a windy day
that day we lit
our Bon-fire
but the gusts
seemed to die
as all our friends
gathered round
strengthing our fire
but as time seemed to pass
they all began to leave
and left was just us two
the fire bellowed
and we threw on gasoline
sat to watch our materpice
but as time seemed to pass
with less and less tending
the wind blew and logs crumbled
and slowly our fire was reduced
to nothing but embers
leaveing us cold and alone
friends arrive to comfort and warm
and our fire jumps to life again
but as we talk
around with friends
we all know that
this fire will never
be the same again
in due time it could flare up again
then die down just as fast
but this fire will never come around
to that time where we
poured out all that gasoline
because everytime is truely unique
Copyright ©
wakegurl77
... [
2005-07-17 00:56:00]
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Re: Fire
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by rockergirl94 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:34:38 PM AEST
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A very interesting take on relationships- it makes me think.
"sat to watch our masterpiece"
For some reason I really like that line- in my mind there seems to be something significant about it.
Julie |
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Re: Fire
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by Benny14 on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:35:34 AM AEST
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| i like the possibility of metaphor behind this poem...nicely done |
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Re: Fire
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 11:04:36 AM AEST
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i like the metaphor that is this poem...i just love that!
great write
- Bethani - |
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Re: Fire
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by pureheart07 on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 10:22:44 PM AEST
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| I'm a lil confused is the frie a modafor or an actally frie? |
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Re: Fire
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by SpellofNature on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 07:13:13 PM AEST
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| Beautiful Imagery |
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