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The Show....
Contributed by
DAVIS
on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 08:14:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The Show.............
Midnight has arrived...
It's 12:15...
Me, in my reserved seat...
You, up on the screen...
As the movie begins,...
I can't help but think...
Why do I hold the only ticket?...
Why does my heart continually sink?...
I see the children have grown...
Your beautiful, as I always say...
Words don't do you justice...
You still take my breath away...
As you settle into my arms,...
Its become quite clear...
Morning has come again...
The end of the movie is near...
Images so vivid...
As real as, it might seem...
It was the only show playing...
It was only a dream...
Copyright ©
DAVIS
... [
2005-07-17 08:14:53]
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Re: The Show....
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 04:45:57 PM AEST
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I like this...you put a unique spin on love lost. Nicely done!
Scorp. |
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Re: The Show....
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by Drapes on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 08:12:09 PM AEST
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Wow, that's really good! And sad in a way...I understand...
Best wishes to you!
-Drapes |
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Re: The Show....
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by cocobeware on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 07:47:32 PM AEST
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| good write i enjyit |
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Re: The Show....
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by cocobeware on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 07:47:59 PM AEST
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| good write i enjoy reading it |
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