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Your Addiction
Contributed by
brknhrtdvamp16
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 02:29:12 PM in AEST
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A small cut turns into a larger one
And before you know it...
That large cut turns into an addiction
At first the pain is intense
Then it goes away
And eventually it turns into pleasure
The blood scares you
Then you dont notice it
And in the end, you enjoy the site of it
As you cut each day
And you lose more and more blood
You grow weak and you cant fix it
The addiction takes over your life
And as badly as you want to deny it...
You must admit that the addiction is something you love
You dont want to stop
And you turn to other things
the burning comes next...
The blisters and smoke
Are sickening to you
But they make you smile
At the end of the tunnel
As you try to turn around
You see that you are trapped
And your addiction kicks in
And you cut once more
And you love the site until it disappears
All around you is fire and pain
At first you are scared
Then you adapt
It's your own fault
You didn't stop in time
And now you will suffer in your own hell!
Visions of the ones you loved
And the ones you hurt
Surround you and you collapse
As you wake,
You see it was a dream
And you see the ones you loved are all around
You are thankful to be alive
And you vow to never do it again
But you can never escape your addiction
Or can you...?
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Re: Your Addiction
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 07:00:03 PM AEST
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| nicely written and put keep up the good work and hope to see some cheerful poems in the future. |
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Re: Your Addiction
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by CrimsonTears on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:33:51 PM AEST
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i can relate to that poem so well....it was like my life pretty much...but i have yet to stop my addiction...it is a hard one to stop...excellent job with this poem it is soo well written...great work!
Lots of Love
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