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Killing The Senses
Contributed by
PuppetEcho
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 03:14:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I can still smell the smoke
from the smoldering fire in the back room
I tried to put it out
but the odor still seems to loom
staining my white walls
with scorched black marks
soon I will see nothing
everything will become the deepest dark
i can't get out
all the doors are sealed tight
now everything's black
and i've lost all sight
Copyright ©
PuppetEcho
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2005-07-17 15:14:29]
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Re: Killing The Senses
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 05:09:42 PM AEST
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Ah yes, old haunts can become all-consuming...I like the symbolism...Nice write!
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Re: Killing The Senses
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by amaya_h_k on
Wednesday, 22nd March 2006 @ 03:18:44 PM AEST
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| its nicely symbolic with strong details. good job. |
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Re: Killing The Senses
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by princess-of-rock on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 05:16:12 PM AEST
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| great imagery you hav used in this poem of yours. i really liked it. well done and keep up the good work |
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