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Jump in the Fire
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 10:51:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Jump in the fire
You know it is what you desire
You know we are all going to hell anyway
So why dont you just end your life today?
You know we are all going down
So just turn that smile into a frown
And just jump into the fire
Follow your hearts desire
You know we are going to get you,
So just give up now and let go
You can fight us and yell No!
But you are going to go
Whether you want to or not,
You can give it all you have got,
We are going to find you
And then catch you, too
You can run; you can hide
But it is you we are going to find
So, jump in the fire,
Follow your souls desire
Come join us in hell
It is just like fire in a well
You are coming anyway
So why not make it today?
So, jump in the fire,
Follow your minds desire
You know you are coming here
And you should have no fear
So come and join us
We are the ones to trust
We know what is best for you
And what is best is that you go
So, jump in the fire
Follow your bodys desire
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Re: Jump in the Fire
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by Bones on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 05:35:04 PM AEST
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Really good poem. Being that is influenced by a band, I bet you could easily put music to it! Well...very good poem/song!
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Re: Jump in the Fire
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by Archie on
Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:52:56 AM AEST
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| It is an interesting write - This is how temptation works. I think you did a great job of portraying that even if it was influenced by a band |
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