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Midnight Paradise
Contributed by
thepizzaguy
on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 11:11:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I went down to the dock
late one night with you.
It was kind of cold,
with a 61 degree low
for the evening,
clear skies,
and a full moon.
But the weather didn't matter.
We sat and talked for hours.
about everything that made us
who we are.
I gave you my jacket when you got cold.
Looking into your eyes,
you reflect the wonders of a
midnight paradise.
And at the same time,
I can see the insuing sunrise,
as we both wake,
in each other's arms.
But as I look closer,
I see my reflection.
And this dock on which we sit.
And as I close my eyes and kiss you,
it occurs to me,
that you are my midnight sweetheart
and this...
...this is my midnight paradise...
Copyright ©
thepizzaguy
... [
2005-07-17 23:11:00]
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Re: Midnight Paradise
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by emystar on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 11:21:15 PM AEST
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A beautifull, magical write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Midnight Paradise
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:26:19 AM AEST
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I like. It's awkward, and I like that. You're breaking away from the a-typical form you find here.
good stuff.
always, abraham |
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Re: Midnight Paradise
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by brew on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 08:39:14 AM AEST
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| very peaceful write |
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