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Infidel fatality
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:25:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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toes soft on carpet
don't make a sound
midnight quiet starvation
no one's around
don't make a sound
letters unaddressed and mailed for saving
begging, desperate, please be found
tuck in tight beneath the covers
we have our secrets from one another
the toilet's full of broken promises
my insides always inside out
don't make a sound
i won't be found
if i don't make a sound
don't keep a frown
shillouette of blades i swear
they'll disappear
when you are here
once you close your eyes to sleep
i'll find fatality in the secrets i keep
toes gentle on the carpet
don't make a sound
i pulled the food from the pantry
threw it out
it's a waste of life
don't make a sound
i'm alright
bleeding inhabitions
midnight expeditions
what won't be found
don't make a sound
sleep tonight
it's my delight
quiet affair
confused tear
but i'm laughing for the blood in the sink
on my night gown
on the floor
i'm laughing inside
don't stir tonight
don't make a sound
i'll be alright
tomorrow i wake up alive
in tact
midnight affairs that i can't take back
recovery was a permenant relapse
shhhh
don't make a sound
i won't be found
i'll embrace fatality
with the secrets i bleed
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2005-07-18 00:25:53]
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Re: Infidel fatality
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 12:30:32 AM AEST
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I like it a lot! The only part that bothered me was the frown part...it seemed to shatter the ambience...but still, it's good.
always, abraham |
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Re: Infidel fatality
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 04:08:09 AM AEST
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| another wonderful write, well done |
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