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The Meaning of Love
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 03:39:37 AM in AEST
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Love the doer of all things good
Fuels the fire with sticks and wood
Gives the spark to make it burn
Bright and warm, listen and learn
Love moves with mysterious hand
Sunshine and bright golden sand
Scent of roses in the air
Hands to hold, secrets to share
Love the aphrodisiac of power
Love can make the weakest, flower
Love the drug of ecstasy
Sets the seeds of passion free
Unconditional, ever true
Love is waiting here for you
Love will make your spirit whole
Love the essence of the soul
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2005-07-18 03:39:37]
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Re: The Meaning of Love
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by Karlee14 on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 05:25:18 AM AEST
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Wow excellent poem. Except you didn't really say what the meaning of love is. Start by asking yourself what is love. Most people would say an emotion but I think it is so much more. In your own words "the essence of the soul". I truely loved that line. So anyway what love is, is a pleasure. A need that we all must have. It's something that can lift us up one second and crash us down the next. In the end you know I'm right. I speak in the pural second person because I feel that we and us is a better term than you. Anywho enough look at me I'm smart and back to the poem. I loved the first stanza, obviously the AABB patern works perfectly for you.
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Re: The Meaning of Love
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by bernard on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 01:06:10 PM AEST
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| Gwenevere you impress me more and more with your sense of Rhyme. It is one great Pleasure to read your works of art. Have a great day now from bernard. |
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Re: The Meaning of Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:49:18 PM AEST
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lovely write ros always in the name of love . . .
Ben |
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Re: The Meaning of Love
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:49:24 PM AEST
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I rspectfully disagree with Karlee Ros..
You demonstrate the meaning very clearly:
"The doer of all things good"
"The spark to make it burn"
"Sunshine and bright golden sand"
ect..
Karlee should heed the last line of the first I think..
Refreshing Ros..great write.
With Respect-
B |
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Re: The Meaning of Love
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by CarolinaBlue on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 09:46:51 PM AEST
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I thought this was a beautiful write.
Love is so multi-layered and very hard to
describe in so few words, but I thought you did it eloquently.
~Blue~ |
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