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In a Hundred Years
Contributed by
LolaWhite
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Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 01:33:56 PM in AEST
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I could think of you for hours, and maybe now I will
In a hundred years or more I will love you still
You have given me a gift so sweet
Two big blue eyes, tiny hands and feet
The world is new, and untouched right now
She will learn through us, we'll show her how
Dreams and thoughts of our life as three
I think about our family
We have so many things we want to do
So many discoveries, things that are new
I look forward to us in a hundred years
After all the laughter, smiles and tears
When we can love each other without any fears
Copyright ©
LolaWhite
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2005-07-18 13:33:56]
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Re: In a Hundred Years
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:20:52 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem and sounds like a blessed event has taking place, such captivating emotions, well done my friend . . . |
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Re: In a Hundred Years
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:22:43 PM AEST
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most worthy of a second coment such a good
feeling i received from reading this . . .
Ben |
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Re: In a Hundred Years
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 08:05:51 PM AEST
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Awww...sounds like someone's been blessed with a little, beautiful bundle of joy! Congratulations: )
Nice write...very sweet.
Scorp. |
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Re: In a Hundred Years
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by sride686 on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 09:26:14 PM AEST
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| Great write and I’m glad to hear you have found so much joy in the new life you have with the one you love. I to have a new beautiful girl that I love with all my heart but also miss so much well I’m over here in Iraq. This poem was sweet and flows very well. I’m sure your family will love it and it will touch their hearts to read it. Take care always and keep up the writes….Steve |
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Re: In a Hundred Years
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:20:08 AM AEST
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| awww....this is so cute, i am so happy for you:) great write! -Steph |
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Re: In a Hundred Years
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:35:03 PM AEST
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Lola...
Very beautiful writing ... I love how you showed your love in the poem.. What a wonderful mothers poem for a beautiful child..
I look forward to us in a hundred years
After all the laughter, smiles and tears
When we can love each other without any fears
This got me all choked up..
Oh yes.. earth is not where we are to be forever.. Jesus has prepared us a place for his beautiful children..
ty for sharing.. I wil see you in heaven...
Raquel Leah |
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