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I dislike her hugs
Contributed by
In_a_while
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Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 02:24:37 PM in AEST
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hbadday
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she's very dark eyes
and sleeps like a baby
turning her hair to a morning's blue fading
i like her true
but i dislike affection
that weighs me down like a world
love's such a burden
a minefield of words
and yet she comes to me forward
what will it take
to remove her care
and her wonder at why that i paint
she'd like to see
what's brewing in me
but that's for me to relate
i want her to whisper
she's quite a good listener
but paint won't create on its own
so smother me sometime tomorrow...
dw
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Re: I dislike her hugs
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 11:33:32 PM AEST
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| she's an emotional drain .. that it??? takes out but doesn't put in ... I love the last line ... |
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Re: I dislike her hugs
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:26:51 PM AEST
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i feel that way as well
good write
--> Rae |
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Re: I dislike her hugs
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 07:17:25 PM AEST
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I love this write
But sounds like you need some space
God Bless! |
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