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Two Minutes
Contributed by
pastiche247
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Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:31:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here is the source of our culture
The silence that gathers us,
One after one,
Arresting the world
In its wake.
Here is the moment we died.
Here is the moment
We lift up our heads
And are born.
Look back.
Look forward
Humanity hangs in the balance.
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pastiche247
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2005-07-18 19:31:24]
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Re: Two Minutes
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by Unbreakable on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:45:31 PM AEST
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Interesting write, I like it alot. It flows really well. It could be interpreted a few different ways and it gives the reader something to think about. Great work, keep it up!
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Re: Two Minutes
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 02:48:59 PM AEST
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| I interpet apathy to enlightenment in this profundity. Humanity does, indeed, hang in the balance. Great poem! |
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