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Your Love For Me
Contributed by
sride686
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:47:04 PM in AEST
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Your beautiful eyes
Fill with never ending love for me
Your tears that fall
For you will always care for me
Your love so strong
For you are always here for me
A love like ours
I only want you here with me
And fare apart
Only makes my heart burn for thee
My thoughts are lost
There in a trance thats filled with greed
Lost in love
Cause all I want is you with me
Time is hard
For it holds us fare apart
And I need you here
To come and fill my heart
Make me complete
And satisfy my greed
Fill me with your love
And the warmth of you with me
But you are here
I feel you in my heart
And my love is with you
And together it will never part
So we are forever united
And together as one
But I will miss you with love
In tell these days are done
~Steve~
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Re: Your Love For Me
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by LolaWhite on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 02:37:30 PM AEST
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Your wife is a lucky woman to have such a talented poet for a husband. You write sweet things to her. Love IS great! Keep sharing your writes with us and the one you love.
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Re: Your Love For Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:45:11 PM AEST
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Hey Steve, good to see you posting again! I think this was a fairly good write, contrary to what you believe. It had a nice, smooth flow, and your love shined through your words. Your dedication to your wife is evident. A lovely write my friend! Take Care, and I hope you can get home soon to your family...
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