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The person inside..
Contributed by
Sexi_Lexi
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 02:05:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It talks to you
It understand's you
It knows everything
You can't hide anything from it
It is beyond your power
It controls you
No matter what you want to do
It does what it wants
It knows you pain
It know your thoughts
It knows your pain
It knows you Happiness
The Child Inside You......
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2005-07-19 14:05:27]
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Re: The person inside..
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by brokenbutterfly on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 05:46:30 PM AEST
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Woohoo! Your first comment in "ages." Anyways I just wanted to say I really liked the poem. There's a sort of absolute truth to it and I think people should aknowledge their inner child more often. Maybe then they could see the beauty in the world an in people more often. Great write.
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Re: The person inside..
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by colinbaker62 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 12:02:22 PM AEST
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| I couldn't agree more. Perish the thought of stifiling the child inside me. long live the inner child ! |
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