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Suicide's Ghost
Contributed by
hearts4pain
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:40:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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its a song with no words.
just feelings in the dark.
it hums softly and gentley,
just enough to fill the silence.
yet its so loud.
a few broken notes.
a couple off keys.
some more silent crys
and a bunch of screams.
even the deaf can hear.
its all in my head,
this catchy tune.
its music to my heart
and death to my broken mind.
Copyright ©
hearts4pain
... [
2005-07-19 21:40:51]
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Re: Suicide's Ghost
(User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 08:58:59 PM AEST
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i hated the fact that you wrote this so long ago yet didn't get a single comment, so i'm your first!
great poem btw, the expression, word usage, all great
~natalya
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Re: Suicide's Ghost
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by Kayden on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 12:27:02 PM AEST
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| Wow... This is a breath takeing wright... This symbolysm that you used was awesome... Everything just flowed with itself... I loved it this is one of my favorites... |
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