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Beach excursion...................Weeeee, shall see
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 11:07:47 PM in AEST
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I wonder if you could send a message
It would be in a green bottle
For one, yet all....
And maybe .....
Just maybe
It could
And would
BE found
Just think
What would be
To know it was free
To be seen
By many
Yet few
Could they actually
Know what......
Or could they understand?!
Hmm In doubt for myself
I think
Next week at the beach
I will see
If this can be reached!
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brew
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Re: Beach excursion...................Weeeee, shall see
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 11:16:57 PM AEST
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lovely poem very beat, " beatnik " some bongos and a smoke, a drink, and i could go 4 this very nice approach, touch of the 50ts era . . .
Ben
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Re: Beach excursion...................Weeeee, shall see
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 09:09:27 AM AEST
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| thank you for your comments on my write it is much appreciated. This write was different but not bad. More of a fun write then one from the heart. I need to learn to write fun writes and take a break from my heart writes. Take care and keep up the writes….Steve |
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