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Fight with Death
Contributed by
sride686
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Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:26:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Ive had questions of life
Of were is my place
Lost in the dark
Alone in disgrace
Pain that I brought
From a loss in my heart
Pain that I bought
That ripped me apart
Death I took
Like pieces of gold
I handed my life over
And gave him control
But what did I get
And what did I gain
A short little life
Is all he has to claim
he rules are lives
As were filled with sin
he rules this world
Tell we reach the end
But think for a minuet
And give God a chance
Let Him come in
And release this trance
For He offers life
Thats filled with love
And He offers a love
that comes from above
Our sins are greed
That take over are life
Hidden in pleasure
That are so hard to find
he masks them so well
And they feel so right
But we no inside
For we start to die
We feel the evil
As it comes to life
To take control
And take over our life
Its a hard fight
And its only begun
Ill give Him a chance
And be with Him as one
Hell never leave me
Event if I stray
He will always wait
For me to come back His way
Life is hard and its hard to trust
But Ill look through the darkness
And give Him my trust
~Steve~
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Re: Fight with Death
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:39:03 AM AEST
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A beautiful write and well gained insight . . .
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Re: Fight with Death
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by LolaWhite on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:29:39 AM AEST
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Another beautiful write from the heart Steve. I love your honesty and truth (as always). I like the imagery in this one. So many good lines.
LW (Mrs. sride686...and proud of it) ;) |
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Re: Fight with Death
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 01:35:38 PM AEST
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Another awsome write Steve.
take care
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Re: Fight with Death
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 06:07:31 PM AEST
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Great to see u posting again Steve.
As always u write with such depth and truth. Whatever u write about u capture its true essence so well.
May God always protect u and keep u safe in Iraq my friend.
Great to see u back again
Hugs,
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Re: Fight with Death
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 10:50:25 AM AEST
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I like the way you worded this one Steve...There's a positive vibe in it, and I'm glad, because you need your faith right now, more than ever...Good write my friend.
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