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Will you ever
Contributed by
strwbrrystrbrst0225
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Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:06:32 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Shattered Ive fallen , broken from the inside out Holding on to what amounts to nothing, Giving in to this last breath Im falling into your arms, I cant stand anymore Im lost in all this misery , and this is all thats left of me.
Ive come this far only to lose, Ive lost everything , I gave in to u This is my only hope, But theres no light in the dark Please come hold me forever , because I cant live anymore Im going under, and this is all thats left of me.
Im stuck in this moment, this memory Time goes right past me as I miss you being with me I close my eyes, but I have no more faith Im losing control , Im to blind to see. Ive lost myself , but you can find me I need you with me , but theres nothing left of me.
I need you to love me. But I dont know if you do And you shouldnt promise me a broken dream, If you cant be what I need. Ill love you forever , But will you ever love me?
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Re: Will you ever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Urizen on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 07:13:29 PM AEST (User
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This poem contains feelings that I can certainly sympathise with. The texture seems a little un-even which I like as it represents the turmoil, you are going through. I think this is a good poem, Thank you for sharing it x |
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Re: Will you ever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Man_On_High on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 09:08:26 PM AEST (User
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I feel ya..
your pain is very evident in your write..
Dreams don'y die, only hope does-
so keep hope alive and your dreams will come true.
Much HOPE and happiness to you my friend-
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