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Will you ever

Contributed by strwbrrystrbrst0225 on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:06:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Shattered Ive fallen , broken from the inside out
Holding on to what amounts to nothing,
Giving in to this last breath
Im falling into your arms, I cant stand anymore
Im lost in all this misery , and this is all thats left of me.

Ive come this far only to lose,
Ive lost everything , I gave in to u
This is my only hope,
But theres no light in the dark
Please come hold me forever , because I cant live anymore
Im going under, and this is all thats left of me.

Im stuck in this moment, this memory
Time goes right past me as I miss you being with me
I close my eyes, but I have no more faith
Im losing control , Im to blind to see.
Ive lost myself , but you can find me
I need you with me , but theres nothing left of me.

I need you to love me.
But I dont know if you do
And you shouldnt promise me a broken dream,
If you cant be what I need.
Ill love you forever ,
But will you ever love me?





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Re: Will you ever (User Rating: 1 )
by Urizen on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 07:13:29 PM AEST
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This poem contains feelings that I can certainly sympathise with. The texture seems a little un-even which I like as it represents the turmoil, you are going through. I think this is a good poem, Thank you for sharing it x


Re: Will you ever (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 09:08:26 PM AEST
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I feel ya..
your pain is very evident in your write..

Dreams don'y die, only hope does-
so keep hope alive and your dreams will come true.

Much HOPE and happiness to you my friend-

B




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