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My Sorry
Contributed by
dorkfish
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Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 04:58:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I hate the way I overreact
I hate the way I am quick to attack
I hate the way I push people away, when I so badly want them to stay.
I hate the way I am so needy
I hate the way I am with my feelings, greedy.
I hate the way I pick a fight, when I really want to be held tight.
I hate the way I feel so lonely when I'm alone
I hate the way I don't take care of my home
I hate the way I so badly need love, but I'm always finding someone else to take care of.
I hate the way I feel so left out
I hate the way I am quick to shout
I hate the way I put up walls, when I so badly want to be caught when I fall.
I'm sorry for the way I am sometimes............
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Re: My Sorry
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 05:12:17 PM AEST
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Hey, don't be so harsh on yourself. I do the same exact things. I have turned it over and over in my mind and can't figure it out and that used to be my job, lol. Maybe we should start a forum and see who else has these problems and maybe we can all work them out together. What you say. Something happened to cause is. Sometimes we are just to close to the forest . . . I have to run to the store. Why don't you start the thread in the forum and we will go from there. What do we have to lose?????
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Re: My Sorry
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 11:33:02 AM AEST
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Are you a Scorpio too? ; )
I like the repeated word theme happening here, and the fast paced flow, that throws the lines in your face...Another well expressed piece!! Keep 'em coming!
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Re: My Sorry
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by Willofree on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:54:20 PM AEST
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The poem certainly candidly reflects as to where you are at with yourself. Please be careful not to describe yoursellf in all or nothing terms: i.e. all good or all bad. That helps us balance what we like and don't likd; and at least we can see we are not all a failure. I'm sure however, that the main issue isn't whether you are good enough, but rather a issue of low self esteem. The behavior you describe is probably just a defense mechanism - a safety shield.
Anyway I wish you the very best; and remember, you are worth the effort.
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Re: My Sorry
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by Willofree on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:56:52 PM AEST
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The poem certainly candidly reflects as to where you are at with yourself. Please be careful not to describe yoursellf in all or nothing terms: i.e. all good or all bad. That helps us balance what we like and don't likd; and at least we can see we are not all a failure. I'm sure however, that the main issue isn't whether you are good enough, but rather a issue of low self esteem. The behavior you describe is probably just a defense mechanism - a safety shield.
Anyway I wish you the very best; and remember, you are worth the effort.
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Re: My Sorry
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by Willofree on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:56:52 PM AEST
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The poem certainly candidly reflects as to where you are at with yourself. Please be careful not to describe yoursellf in all or nothing terms: i.e. all good or all bad. That helps us balance what we like and don't likd; and at least we can see we are not all a failure. I'm sure however, that the main issue isn't whether you are good enough, but rather a issue of low self esteem. The behavior you describe is probably just a defense mechanism - a safety shield.
Anyway I wish you the very best; and remember, you are worth the effort.
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Re: My Sorry
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by colinbaker62 on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 06:09:43 PM AEST
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Hi Dorkfish. This was a delight to read, and don't be sorry for the feelings you set forth, they are, in my view excellent examples of contradictorary aspects that all humans (in fact all living things) have. Therefore, totally to be expected.
Contradiction, one famous philosopher once argued, is the key to understanding qualitative changes in things. Wonderful !!!
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Re: My Sorry
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by boobiepeach on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 03:08:44 PM AEST
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i never read this poem and i am sorry for that. i wish you would talk to me and b more. this poem upset me. you are loved. good write and i am proud.
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