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lost again
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 08:31:17 PM in AEST
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i was doing alright i thought i was ok til you wrote me to say hey
you said i lied and you called me a jerk we havent talked since last sunday at work
yes i got drunk and i went dancing why do you care
you have your love i dont think its fair
you said you wanted to start a relationship now im not to be
because i got drunk cause you didnt want anything to do with me
im in love with a girl who has another man
just another one another fan
so what can i do to make it alright
i was planning on leaving getting away from your life
but no here i am on the verge of a fall
and you dont want to even call
i will die here today and leave all my past behind
just once cant you see that my love is blind
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Re: lost again
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by Shyness on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:03:37 PM AEST
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| Great Write but Its depressing. I can really relate to this poem and I hope you get through everything ok. If you ever need to talk just send me a message and I'll respond as fast as I can. You might be suprised how well I can relate.(Oh and I can't spell either :) ) |
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Re: lost again
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:38:16 PM AEST
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You know you can click on the box to have the mods check your spelling and it won't look like you didn't care what you posted. We don't have to get over it. It just makes people not read you anymore.
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Re: lost again
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:27:18 AM AEST
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Some people can't see good are just aren't consientious enuff.
U had the yes on all time.
Another great write, friend.
huggs, smiles,
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