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Neighbouring Love
Contributed by
Tricky
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 01:12:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You said you wanted me
and I believed you.
Our talks lasted through the night
and I thought you were serious.
Whats so wrong with me that you feel the need to lie?
Why do you need to tease my breaking heart and spirit?
I've wanted this for so long
and I know you have too
I want you to date me
but all you want is sex
Why must I feel this way when you don't?
How can I see that your not the way for me?
Copyright ©
Tricky
... [
2005-07-21 01:12:57]
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Re: Neighbouring Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Skinney86 on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 02:28:58 AM AEST
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| WOW deep poem, seems harsh but i enjoyed it! |
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Re: Neighbouring Love
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by liquidsunshine on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 02:32:11 AM AEST
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Like I told you before, this poem is great because it's honest. I'm so excited that you're writing! You make me so happy sometimes!!
I love you girlie!
Chels |
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Re: Neighbouring Love
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by Tricky on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 03:01:57 PM AEST
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| Just to let you know, I've given up on the guy that inspired this poem. |
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Re: Neighbouring Love
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by Tricky on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 12:35:09 PM AEST
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| Please comment...I need some feedback! |
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