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No One Care
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 12:09:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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No one cares at all
When we fall
No one likes you
Everyone is untrue
It is true for everyone
If you think you have someone
It is all just another lie,
You might as well say goodbye
No one cares
All they do is swear
When they have to help you,
Help themselves is all they want to do
So do not be fooled
No one is really that cool
They just care about money
They dont call anyone honey
It is all gone,
Everything went wrong
No one cares about anyone
Not even that special someone
It is all one great lie
No one cares if we die
They dont care when we cry,
Just walk away and say bye
Do not be fooled
No one is really that cool
No one cares at all
In fact, theyll help you fall
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Re: No One Care
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by N0body on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 04:53:39 PM AEST
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| I liked your idea..but i think it woulda been better if you weren't so "to the point"...or if you described things rather than just said it. i dunno. Cool. |
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Re: No One Care
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by rockergirl94 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:12:29 PM AEST
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Well you certainly got your point across. My favorite lines are "Help themselves is all they want to do" and "In fact, they’ll help you fall".
You sound pretty mad at the world- just don't forget that while you might be bitter at the world, it's not bitter at you.
Julie |
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