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The Presence Of You
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 07:36:15 PM in AEST
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Heart skipping beats
Butterflies raging
The thought of you
Seeing your smiling face
In me mind, arms reaching out
Out to hug you and hold you
Not daring to act upon it
I turn away and long
For your huggings
Me body trembling
Debating should I say
The unspoken words
That lay upon me mind
Not able to find the right words
Unsure of the reaction
I keep silence and just smile
At the presence of you
~~Nats~~
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Re: The Presence Of You
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 04:44:08 PM AEST
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| i believe we all feel this way when we truely care for someone |
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Re: The Presence Of You
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by rosethorn100 on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 01:22:06 PM AEST
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lovely poem as always, it always hard when we around someone we love and don't give back, we yearn them, yet we afraid to make a move of the uncertain reaction.
I hope things work out for u both
huggggggggggggs
rosey xxx |
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Re: The Presence Of You
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 10th August 2005 @ 08:33:25 PM AEST
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Sometimes feeling that are so deep and so strong should be shown, whatever the consequences.
Of course, easier to say it than do it.
Steve |
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Re: The Presence Of You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 05:13:53 AM AEST
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You never cease to amaze me, Nats. Another beautiful write from you. How I can oooooh so much relate to this one. “Not able to find the right words - Unsure of the reaction” Can definitely relate. As always, thank you for sharing your gifted talent with us.
Huggs,
Tim
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Re: The Presence Of You
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by Archie on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:59:43 PM AEST
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| this is good. you have a simple way of presenting deep things. |
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Re: The Presence Of You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 07:52:34 PM AEST
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Lovely and y not a poem about a most heart warming subject, love that line" not daring to
act on it " amazing ain't it how hard love can be to express yet anger seems to come so easy, keep writting i'll keep reading, your coming through with that inner beauty . . .
Ben |
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