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Full Moon
Contributed by
wakensnowboarder
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Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 11:54:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Laying in bed I have a nice view of the moon
it's full tonight and shines light thru my room
It lacks the energy, however, to get me going
A reminder of the life I've been destroying
Full of light but far far away
If I could grab something closer I'd be obliged to stay
How about a line or a simple hand
or at least can someone pretend to give a damn
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wakensnowboarder
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2005-07-21 23:54:04]
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Re: Full Moon
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by Sinned on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 06:06:57 AM AEST
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I love a full moon especially a harvest moon.Now to be loved you must first love yourself then others will care.your poem reeks of self-pity.
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Re: Full Moon
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by RebelRose on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 07:48:59 PM AEST
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| i like it but i also like pretty much every poem that talks about the moon |
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