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Pain cycle
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 09:46:30 AM in AEST
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All the rain evaporate
only to fall down again
All the apologies accepted
only to come again
All the mistakes forgiven
only to be repeated again
Two times
A span of a lifetime
No time
For fools like me
Any time
the note of rejection from the world
will be upon my hand
And all the tears dried up
only to drip down again
All the wounds well-healed
only to open up again
All the pain well beared
only to find again
Harder to bear
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2005-07-22 09:46:30]
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Re: Pain cycle
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by sandypoet on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:01:16 AM AEST
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| Wow. I like how you wrote this. It is so true isn't it... |
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Re: Pain cycle
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by sandypoet on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:01:40 AM AEST
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| Wow. I like how you wrote this. It is so true isn't it... |
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Re: Pain cycle
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:43:38 AM AEST
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| a very emotional write. i imagine you were glad to vent this. im sure many can relate. christopher. |
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Re: Pain cycle
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by LevyMetal on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:05:42 AM AEST
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oooh! really good write. very well expressed and painted. I really love the line "All the mistakes forgiven only to be repeated again". Strong and solid peice!
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Re: Pain cycle
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by justme03 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:35:22 AM AEST
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wow
this is an awesome poem
every word spoken (written lol) truthfully.
i like how you started it sounding like a water cycle but it is a pian cycle. i love the images you created here. loved this
luv, ~Kortnie~ |
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Re: Pain cycle
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by gwenevere on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 01:43:23 PM AEST
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| Very clever write.The circle of life.good read, Ros |
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Re: Pain cycle
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 03:37:44 PM AEST
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I love the analogy used here.. Good write
Jenni |
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Re: Pain cycle
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by Cryptiss on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 11:23:59 AM AEST
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| there is so much truth in this poem and it can be taken in so many ways. use in many different situations. you can really go anywhere you would like with it and plug it into anything in your own life. very diverse good job keep it up |
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