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Alone
Contributed by
darkangel01
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:44:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The lights go out
It turns black
His voice is so calm and soothing
His skin is like satin
He smells of honey
His hand touches my face
so calmly, so gently
He runs his fingers through my hair
And whispers in my ear "I'll never leave you"
And then he kisses me
His lips are so soft and gentle
I feel a warmth, comfort, security, a love.
I open my eyes to look at him
And he is gone...
I don't understand it felt so real.
I geuss it's true...
I am... Alone.
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darkangel01
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2005-07-22 11:44:19]
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Re: Alone
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 12:10:10 PM AEST
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Great emotion in this one my friend. I felt the sorrow and longing at the end.
Very well done
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