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the passing day
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 06:38:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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solemn tears
hidden fears
passing years
no one hears
life once here
never gone
crowded here
but all alone
death defying
bursting the word
death is crying
no one heard
fade away
new born fae
been so gray
this passing day
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Re: the passing day
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 07:46:56 PM AEST
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yep.. you can be lonely in a crowd..
a room full of people, and still be all alone..
Shout at the top of you lungs..
otherwise.. how can you be heard..
Make your presence be known.. scream like hell..
Nice write.. ty..
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Re: the passing day
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by sride686 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 03:55:21 AM AEST
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A very good write my friend and it was worded so very well. It had a great flow and rhythm that really drew you in and carried you through the write. Thanks foe your comments on some of my older writes it is much appreciated. Take care my friend….Steve |
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