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My Time or Melancholy
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:13:57 PM in AEST
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In my time or melancholy
smothered in the quiet night..
when all I see is moonlight cast
faded pale blue
and we all lie still
in the glory of grief..
I create by the mourning shine.
Not for others and their charm..
but for the price I pay
for all my soul and heart.
In the absence of identity
from this mourning shine I create;
not for the passed who loom,
with memories all our own
but for all who lie still
in the dolor of the story..
created in my time or melancholy.
M.O.H.
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Man_On_High
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:24:22 PM AEST
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well written! i enjoyed this, even though it was, yes, sad :( i liked how you expressed yourself and the way you put it all together. well down, keep it up!
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by jyssvw22 on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:35:49 PM AEST
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hey moh, this was great, simple and direct...i think anyone who is creative in one way or another can relate ..
nice job |
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by nanb294eva on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:39:31 PM AEST
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keep writing no matter what happy or sad poems they are all great and someday will make you famous even if like Poe you have to be dead your poems are right up there with his and belong in a book
great write
love nancy |
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:48:50 PM AEST
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Nicely done Billy...you expressed yourself well, and I think most of us here can relate.
Scorp. |
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 12:58:10 AM AEST
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Yes, we can all surely agree with this, sadly.
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by Kayden on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:31:22 AM AEST
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mourning shine- Great play on words... You did a good job... I could tell that you put some thought into this one... Its was sad but awesomne at the same time ha ha...
Great Job... |
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 06:56:59 AM AEST
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| Another great write.Yes we all relate to this, Ros |
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 03:35:09 PM AEST
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Great write and great question, y do we do anything? lovely poem my friend vey earthy . . .
Ben |
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 04:47:11 PM AEST
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Well expressed, Billy..
Written with heart and soul...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by wizard on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:17:18 AM AEST
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great job bro..i enjoyed it even more the second time around.
wizard |
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Re: My Time or Melancholy
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 04:04:40 AM AEST
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And what wonderful masterpieces you do create in the late night....you are splendid!
This one was contained sadness, but the honesty is completely touching and something I can relate to.
This one was a marvel...thanking you for sharing! |
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