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Just Walk Away
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:19:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Go ahead and walk away
Just do it now, do it today
I rather that you leave me
Now, and just leave me be
Dont worry about how it is I feel
No one else has, they just leave me to heal
Just walk away while you are new to me,
Otherwise youll hurt me, cant you see?
If you try to befriend me,
It will hurt when you leave
So just walk away,
Do it now, do it today
I will miss you
That is true
But I rather live in that pain
Instead of the feeling of cold rain
I rather you just walk away,
Leave with nothing to say
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sprinter27
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2005-07-22 22:19:48]
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Re: Just Walk Away
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:38:37 PM AEST
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| Okay...i love it! its so true for me! just keep writing! You rock! |
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Re: Just Walk Away
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by forgottensorrow on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:30:47 PM AEST
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That is so the mood I'm in right now. Good write.
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Re: Just Walk Away
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 11:53:25 PM AEST
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Awww this one really touched me Sprints, and I've felt this way before too...I like your straight-forward expression in this piece...Good job.
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