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my star in the sky
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:18:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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o my love why have you gone
and left me here behind?
i cannot go on without you here
or i think i'll loose my mind
your star in the night sky
shines as the brightest of all
that spark of light so far away
is more precious than any jewel
my tears for you have never ceased
from the moment you went away
and my heart's been broken
from then to this day
i cannot go on like this
i want to be with you in the sky
i dont have any other choice
i have to die
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2005-07-23 13:18:34]
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Re: my star in the sky
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:58:05 PM AEST
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| awesome poem!!! yew really show such great emotions for this person keep writing~Chrissy~ |
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Re: my star in the sky
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 06:51:27 PM AEST
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i love it! you did show gr8 emotions and i feel sry for the speaker of the poem! keep writing! you rock!
~Misunderstood_Gurl~ |
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Re: my star in the sky
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by jemer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:09:07 AM AEST
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| legendary. |
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Re: my star in the sky
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by remote on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 03:27:06 PM AEST
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Here's a real star for you
http://www.lynxtrack.com/afclick.php?o=302&b=c41rrcmc&p=1409&e=003&s=003bundle1&l=3
-J |
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