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False Positive
Contributed by
Lancaster
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Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 09:18:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Adding insult to my wounds
Tucked under eyelids
Salt poured in autonomous silence
Tonsils ripped like chords to a shred
The snap of fingers demands respect
And so received revenge he will get
Practice futility
And embrace the utility of your mind
The trance that inflicts the prophesies of your faithful kind
Linguistic logic says
A metaphor on to itself is dead
A mirror image of exactly what was previously said
Interpreted by the eyeball
Processing things of relevant consequence
Avoiding a false positive negating the hypothesis
A heap of heavens gold
Sits like a plethora of the life force
Giving credence to the struggle and the bearable cost
Take away all of it
The uses for semantics are faint and scarce
Like the romantics in love who never bother to care
In keeping with your unique self
And in realizing your potential and true self worth
A hint of positive in a false negative world
-LAN-
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Lancaster
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2005-07-23 21:18:18]
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Re: False Positive
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by Vampire_Slander on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 10:05:54 PM AEST
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| A good out look on things, very nice. |
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Re: False Positive
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:01:02 AM AEST
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Hmmm...I like this, your style is familiar...Good expression in this piece, and I like the twist at the end...Very nice!
Welcome to YPDC : )
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