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Twilight Of Terror
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 12:03:33 AM in AEST
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I'll never be a angel
no I am not a devil
I go against the flow
pause and reflect
talk to myself and laugh uncontrolably
as
I talk to myself when no one's listening
to combat
voices I hear whispering
talking about some prophecy
about forces gathering
the end to everything..
I gamble and I ramble
I stomp and I trample
I believe in cause and effect
and have dreams of esctasy
but
shadowy figures are following me
mirrors are reflecting
tormented souls
at the gates of hell screaming
so
now I am frantically dancing
got no time for romancing
there is no escaping
that something is coming.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-07-24 00:03:33]
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Re: Twilight Of Terror
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by emystar on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 12:13:51 AM AEST
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Sad but written well. I image if I lived in a big town like u I'd be nuts.
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Re: Twilight Of Terror
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 03:33:29 AM AEST
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Nice write . Good flow and nice end.
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Re: Twilight Of Terror
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 12:22:41 PM AEST
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| Like in London I think we still have to have hope or we really would go mad.We can't let these insane people win,Ros |
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Re: Twilight Of Terror
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 01:27:48 PM AEST
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Very deep emotions in this piece...Well done. You express yourself quite well in your writes. I could see this poem working as a self struggle too.
Good job as always!
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